Introduction: Thesis- Family definitely shapes one’s identity
- I hold back from doing things so I don’t disappoint my family
- I do my best to make them proud
- High morals from my family
Paragraph 2: How family defines who we are
- Our likes and dislikes are similar to those of our family
- Families teach us and show us the way of life
Paragraph 3: Family values passed on
- Grandparents teaching us how to do their favorite things
- Grandparents showing us how to raise our family
- They want us to do our best and make a good impression of our family name
- Support
- Love
- Family will always be there
- They guide us through our path in life
i like everything you did in your outline. :) i think the way you brought everything up is exactly what you need to have a great essay! you will easily get an essay in three pages or maybe even more!
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